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The End of the Road - Chapter 3  
January 22nd, 2013 | 11:35 pm
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Title: The End of the Road

Author: Mad_Stalin_69

Chapter: 3/5

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: ANGST, bad language

Pairings: Kyo/Kaoru; Die/Shinya; Toshiya/Miyavi;

Summary: The last, third part of Until You Lose Your Breath.

Author's comment: Anybody remembers this story? At least I do and it’s been at the back of my mind for ages! I know I said I will definitely finish this, because I absolutely hate discontinued stories, but… I simply do not like this one anymore and for a long time now. I am a little ashamed off all the clichés and silly situations cramped all over in this ‘trilogy’. But on the other hand, it was my first real big thing written in English, so it was a good learning experience which I don’t regret. But I am not going to do it properly anymore. I looked when I last posted a chapter – 3rd of January, 2011. And already then I said I wasn’t feeling very up to completing it the way I intended to. Well anyways, I do have 2 chapters that were supposed to appear later in the story written in 2011, so I’m posting one of those now (it doesn’t follow chapter 2, some time passes between last chapter and this chapter 3). I will pull together a little chapter following this one and then I’ll post the other chapter I had written in 2011 as a last chapter. Which will be nothing compared to what I wanted to include in part 3, but at least it’s something and it’ll answer the last question that is still open and then that’s it. I will be able to put this story away and be at peace :) Because it’s been bugging me that it’s out there, unfinished, half-assed and still demanding to be completed. It’s not going to be what I wanted it to be anymore. For example, I intended to split Toshiya and Myvs apart, but now they get to have their happily ever after :) But oh well, I guess it’s better than just put discontinued after the first two chapters :)


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